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| Each edition of the Women's World Cup brings its own unforgettable moments | |||
| that etch themselves into the history of the sport. From stunning | |||
| touchdowns to nail-biting penalty shootouts, the tournament never fails to | |||
| freekicks to nail-biting penalty shootouts, the tournament never fails to | |||
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| The key distinctions include the shape of the ball, the style of play, the | ||
| rules, and the terminology used in different regions. Both football (soccer) |
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The previous paragraphs have covered the differences between soccer and football, so this sentence is a bit repetitive. I think you could remove the sentence:
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| The key distinctions include the shape of the ball, the style of play, the | |
| rules, and the terminology used in different regions. Both football (soccer) | |
| Both football (soccer) |
| offensive lines, battle for supremacy in this exhilarating event. | ||
| The Women's World Cup is a spectacular showcase of athleticism, skill, | ||
| and passion, bringing together the finest female soccer players from | ||
| around the globe. This prestigious tournament, organized by FIFA, |
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Will the audience know what FIFA is?
Maybe good to define FIFA here
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Fixes the terminology in the world cup article.
Explains the terminology:
Fixes issue
Fixes #2 text