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And from the initial draft to submitting a PR,
everything is happening in the environment you're already familiar with: an Eclipse Che cloud development environment (CDE).

image::/assets/img/contributing-to-eclipse-che-docs/workspace-with-preview.png
An Eclipse Che CDE created from the che-docs repository.
image::/assets/img/contributing-to-eclipse-che-docs/workspace-with-preview.png[An Eclipse Che CDE created from the che-docs repository.]


== Getting started
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What about the che-docs repository makes using an Eclipse Che CDE to contribute content so convenient? The following two elements:

* link:https://eclipse.dev/che/docs/stable/end-user-guide/devfile-introduction/[devfile]
* list of link:https://eclipse.dev/che/docs/stable/end-user-guide/microsoft-visual-studio-code-open-source-ide/#automating-installation-of-microsoft-visual-studio-code-extensions-at-workspace-startup[automatically installed extensions]
* list of link:https://eclipse.dev/che/docs/stable/end-user-guide/microsoft-visual-studio-code-open-source-ide/#automating-installation-of-microsoft-visual-studio-code-extensions-at-workspace-startup[automatically installed Microsoft Visual Studio Code extensions]

Let's look at the devfile first.
The che-docs repository contains a simple link:https://github.com/eclipse-che/che-docs/blob/main/devfile.yaml[devfile]
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When you launch the che-docs workspace for the first time,
these extensions are installed automatically:

image::/assets/img/contributing-to-eclipse-che-docs/extensions.png
Overview of automatically installed extensions, including the Vale extension.
image::/assets/img/contributing-to-eclipse-che-docs/extensions.png["Overview of automatically installed extensions, including the Vale extension."]

You can start working immediately,
with minimal additional setup required.
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* Keep the focus on the user. Write the content around what the user can achieve when they follow your instructions.
* Keep passive voice to a minimum.

image::/assets/img/contributing-to-eclipse-che-docs/pp-hemingway.png
The famous opening lines of Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice novel don't follow any of the writing tips listed in this blog post. At grade 16, they also have a very high readability score in the Hemingway Editor. Your technical document should have a readability score between grade 9 and 11.
image::/assets/img/contributing-to-eclipse-che-docs/pp-hemingway.png["The famous opening lines of Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice novel don't follow any of the writing tips listed in this blog post. At grade 16, they also have a very high readability score in the Hemingway Editor. Your technical document should have a readability score between grade 9 and 11."]


If you want to learn more about technical writing in general,
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